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Daria and Cheyton, ink on paper, 8.5"x11", June 09
Daria and Cheyton, standing before the Grehti they faced down a few days ago.

The story itself is behind my writing lock.

A character study in ink on paper, June '09.
 

Date: 2009-06-20 02:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yonjuunana.livejournal.com
Oh yay! I'm always excited to see art from you, I still feel like I haven't seen very much. Cool to see more of Daria, this definitely gives me a clearer idea of what she looks like. I really like how you did their expressive postures and the details in the clothing and Cheyton's hands. My only critique is that something in the proportions of Cheyton's face look a bit off, like his nose and mouth are at a bit of a different angle than the rest of his face. (Not sure if you were looking for critiques or not. And I'm totally forgetting if I already said this to you or not, but I want to thank you for a critique you gave a while ago about my poses being stiff. I've been working on it since then and I think I've managed to get a bit better. At least I hope so.)
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