Brigit's Flame: October week 4 ("hands")

[pyraxis]

Title: The Shape of Change
Community: brigits_flame October week 4
Prompt: "hands"
Rating: G
Word count: 1583

Where I grew up, you're not an adult until you know how to change. Not change like changing your clothes. Change like your whole body turns inside out and becomes something else.

Ashvir from my village thought it was the funniest thing in the world. His laughing woke me up one morning. I looked down and there was Mother Kiri in tiroth-shape, her hair all standing up on end and her fangs bared, facing off against the biggest fattest spider you ever saw. Her eyes were bugging out from a face all covered in fur, and her arms had grown an extra elbow. Ashvir was hopping on a branch right behind her, pulling his eyelids inside out and biting his bottom lip. She kicked the spider off our platform and I burst out laughing because Ashvir kicked the air too and tripped. He fell down so hard it shook the whole platform and knocked the mother right on her furry tiroth butt.

Grownups hated him, but to me he was like the fruit you weren't supposed to touch. I shadowed him wherever he went, secretly hoping some of that daring would rub off on me.

We played Change, me and Ashvir and the other kids. It was forbidden, of course, until you were fourteen and they took you off into the jungle and you had your shapefinding for real. But we were impatient. The other kids would crowd you in and roar at you and grab at you until you puffed your chest up and bristled your hair, hissed and spat and bared your teeth. I made a good tiroth. I was fast. When I pretended to change and jumped for you, no yelling in my face could stop me. I'd get a handful of hair or tunic before you could dodge.

Most of the people where we lived were tiroth. In other places, they changed into other things, but here, odds were nine in ten that you'd come back knowing how to grow fangs. But until then, the kids just played, and flocked around their next victim. Pretty soon somebody wouldn't be able to take it and and they'd burst into tears and run away.

The afternoon the storm came, we were bored with the usual games. So we all clambered down to the river.

The grownups kept shapefinding a big secret. But we knew. When our fourteenth summer came and they took us away in the night, they were going to kill us.

So we played Kill You too. Today it was Ashvir's turn.

We balanced on the rocks by the rapids, ankle-deep in rushing water. It bit our feet to pull us off balance, and black mud oozed between our toes. All around us, spray rained down over the slick-steep rocks. Jirekka and one of the boys had Ashvir by the arms. He struggled and kicked them, and they yanked him after them, all three of them nearly tumbling into the water.

Everyone jostled each other for a good view and sung out the shapefinding chant, waya-hey, waya-hai.

Over their shoulders, I saw Jirekka dunk Ashvir's head under. He came up spitting water.

We chanted louder, banging our fists against our knees. Everyone's hair was slicked down by the rain, and through the mist it was hard to see whether all the dark shapes were kids or river spirits.

Ashvir shook his hair out of his eyes and tried to stand proud like he should.

She dunked him again, longer. He started thrashing. Wrenched off balance, she stumbled, and they both went down on hands and knees on the slippery rocks.

“Baby. You're supposed to stay still!” Jirekka said and shoved him. He slipped into the deeper water and surfaced with a gasp, struggling against the current.

Jirekka turned back to the rest of the gang. “Come on,” she said to the boy who'd been holding Ashvir. “You can do it better, right?”

The kids broke their circle and pushed for places to see the new show. Jirekka had just grabbed the boy's wrist when the village gong sounded, faint and insistent.

Everybody went still like they'd just been caught with their hands in the sacred wine. Then as one, they were scrambling to their feet and racing up the riverbank.

I was just about to follow them when I spotted a pale still shape by the rocks. Ashvir. He was lying half in and half out of the water, his eyes closed.

The gong was still sounding. I wanted to run after them. We weren't allowed to stay out here by ourselves. I crept over to Ashvir instead.

“Heya, you all right?” It was hard to hear myself over the rain and the river.

He didn't open his eyes.

Tentatively I poked his arm. “Hey. You need to wake up. We have to go.”

Something moved above me. I looked up the bank, spotted another silhouette. Shel. One of the littlest. She crouched at the top of the slope, staring down at me and Ashvir.

“Is he dead?” she asked.

I squinted through the rain. His sopping tunic clung to his chest like a second skin. Underneath, his ribs were moving. Weren't they, just a little? How were you supposed to tell?

“I don't think so,” I said.

“Can you pick him up?”

Fear chilled through me. I felt like a grownup. “You're not supposed to move someone. You have to go get the mothers.”

She looked at me with big dark eyes.

“I'll stay here. You tell the mothers and come back here, all right?”

She bobbed her head very quickly and disappeared over the ridge.

The gong rang and rang and finally stopped. I imagined everyone shaking themselves off under the shelters, crowding into the tree nests as the mothers counted heads. There, they would notice I was missing. There, Shel would come running up and tell them what happened. It would take them to a count of five hundred to run all the way from the platforms to the river.

The rain slowly tapered off as I sat there beside Ashvir. Any moment now, they would come racing over the bank, asking what had gone wrong. Hesitantly, I took his hand. It was as chill and damp as a fish. I rubbed it between mine to warm it.

The sky slowly turned evening-purple.

I wondered when Ashvir would wake up.

Maybe he wouldn't. Maybe he was already dead. He fell really fast. Maybe he hit his head on a rock and drowned while nobody was looking.

Why hadn't they come yet? How long should I wait? I tried to think of what could have gone wrong. Should I start carrying Ashvir home by myself? But what if he was hurt and moving him made it worse?

I reached over and opened his mouth. There wasn't any water coming out.

When people died, you were supposed to put seeds in their mouth, so that their spirit could get born again out of the earth. If he wasn't dead – well, it wouldn't be bad, would it? He could just eat them.

There was a fruit tree bending right over the water. I let go Ashvir's hand and scrambled up the trunk to pull down two fruits for his mouth. They were too big, so I sucked out the juices myself and spit the fat seeds into my palm. It was weird putting them into his mouth. I kept thinking he was going to grab me suddenly and hit me with boy-cooties.

The sky was deep purple by the time Shel's silhouette appeared over the ridge. She was breathing hard from running. She was by herself.

I stood up slowly. “Why didn't you come back?”

“They wouldn't let me,” she said, staring down with frightened eyes.

“Didn't you tell them he got hurt?”

“They said he was gonna be all right.”

I looked over at Ashvir. He lay still on the bank, with his hands laid over his chest and two round seeds nestled on his tongue.

We did it right. The great-mother would find him with his eyes open, ready to be taken back to Her land down below the deepest roots of the tallest tree.

Then there was nothing to do but go back home.

 

 

I know the men went out later, to see if he was really gone. When they came back, the grownups clustered on their own platform and talked in quiet voices. But nobody ever asked me why I didn't come back with the other kids when we heard the gong.

 

 

The kids were wrong. They didn't kill you on shapefinding night. They just tried to make you think you were going to die. Took you out to the jungle in the middle of the night, left you tied to a tree all smeared with nectar, till the worms and the beetles crawled right over you and you got so spooked your body changed and broke the slipknots. They tried to make it worse by making out that if I just kept still enough for long enough, then even if I couldn't change, somebody would come and untie me before anything came that was big enough to eat me. They figured I'd stand there, hoping and waiting and driving myself mad.

It was all right though. Me, I changed right away. I already knew nobody was going to come.

I'm going to be out of town from today till next Wednesday, so I don't know if I'll be able to respond to comments right away. But thank you in advance for reading, and I hope you enjoy. :) I will answer people's posts as soon as I can when I get back.
- Pyraxis

Comments

[jimnightmare.livejournal.com]

I'm back, btw. :P

Hiiiiiiiiiii! I'm kinda crashed out right now... but I totally need to say hi to you. :D I hope you guys had a good time doing whatever it was you were doing!

[pyraxis]

Climbing rocks, of course!

Get yourself uncrashed soon. :D

[jimnightmare.livejournal.com]

Climbing rocks, of course!

XD I shouldn't even have to ask, should I? That's gotta be like the new default answer to stuff. "Where's Daria? Where's Pyraxis?" "Probably on top of a rock somewhere."